We have been focusing on procedural
writing. Here are some instructions written by Kaya. She has practised using
Screencastify by recording herself reading through her instructions.
Thank you so much for making this screencastify. You spoke in a clear voice that was easy to understand. A quick tip for you: remember to read with expression because it can make your screencastify really exciting.
From Setoga class (Hay Park School) hpsfortes.blogspot.co.nz
Thanks for taking the plunge and exploring screencastify as a method of sharing. It can be very nerve-wracking to hear yourself in a recording AND show your learning. I can't wait to see other examples from your class and the comments on them if posted to the blog. James
Hey Kaya! good job! I like the way you used a nice clear voice! Maybe next time you could add adverbs to your instructions to make it a bit more specific.
Talofa lava Kaya I love your chicken and salad roll its making me hungry but I just had a Heart of a chicken already in my stomach anyway use some expression to read your work bye see you on wednesday at school
wow kaya you have done great work you have done a lot of work good that you have used your introductions this reminds me when we did it last year with Miss lawson next time try use better words
Talofa lava Kaya,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for making this screencastify. You spoke in a clear voice that was easy to understand. A quick tip for you: remember to read with expression because it can make your screencastify really exciting.
From Setoga class (Hay Park School)
hpsfortes.blogspot.co.nz
Hey Kaya and Room 4,
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Kia ora Kaya,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job of reading your recipe. You had a good pace of reading it. Have you made the recipe as well?
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ReplyDeleteHey Kaya! good job! I like the way you used a nice clear voice! Maybe next time you could add adverbs to your instructions to make it a bit more specific.
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Deletegreat work kaya.ej
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ReplyDeletegood job kaya keep up the great work.:>:>:>
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