Work of the Week, Week 10!
ANGER
Anger is tanks shooting bombs
Anger is like a cloud up in my head striking, lightning and rain
Anger is fire in your head burning happiness
Anger is a burning fire red and yellow
Fire is a fist pulling out happiness
Teasing is fire... back and forth. Really it should stop.
By Paula L.
Great work Room 4. I like your mixture of similes and metaphors! Did you learn any strategies to deal with these feelings?
ReplyDeletewow paula you have a great poem that reminds me when I did my poem to try to use more adjectives. great work and keep it up you have done real good work.
ReplyDeleteWow Paula! I remember when I got really angry one day I didn't even know how to calm down!I really like the way you used descriptive words and how you compared things to other things(similes) Maybe next time you could add exclamation marks!
ReplyDeleteWOW paula i remember a time i way to angry and i didint know how to calm my self down
ReplyDeletegreat work great personification and i didn't really want it to stop
ReplyDeleteWOW we are working on anger to
ReplyDeleteGREAT WORK!! Paula
ReplyDeleteI remember when I watched a movie with my brother and there was tanks and different bombs. I like the way that you used great adjectives.
Good job Paula
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ReplyDeletenice gob paula
ReplyDeletenice gob paula
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ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing poem Paula!
ReplyDeleteI like the punctuation in the last line, it helps your closing words become even more powerful and evocative.
Thanks for sharing,
Regards from Mr Vogt at Pt England School.